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Divorce
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Haiku
) by
timvick473662003
Both Start seperatly Together you become one She takes all your stuff
Dovina
16-Apr-07/6:56 PM
Wouldn't it mean the same if you shortened it:
Start separately
Become one
She takes all your stuff
But then it wouldn't be 5-7-5. Pity.
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