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Divorce (Haiku) by timvick473662003

Both Start seperatly Together you become one She takes all your stuff

Dovina 16-Apr-07/6:56 PM
Wouldn't it mean the same if you shortened it:

Start separately
Become one
She takes all your stuff

But then it wouldn't be 5-7-5. Pity.




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