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Fading Memory (Free verse) by longships
A lonely existence, memory fading, Can’t recall the number on my door, Can’t remember the names of my neighbours. Letter writing non-existent, Pick up the phone. Never set eyes on a good book, Watch TV. Silence is unheard of, Stretch my legs with a stroll to the shops. Nicotine stains my lungs, Alcohol sears through veins. I feel a nothing among millions, Just another name on a file, With unemployment a first choice in jobs. Despair tears at my memory, A cold tear spells no hope. Senses fix to the noise and fumes of passing traffic, Though, now, I’m used to it, I’ve forgotten through the years.

Up the ladder: my head is a madhouse
Down the ladder: Survivor

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9200
Posted: November 6, 2005 1:18 AM PST; Last modified: November 6, 2005 1:18 AM PST
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[7] Dovina @ 209.247.222.91 | 6-Nov-05/5:05 PM | Reply
A somber tale, and if true, points to the death rate by car accident, 4%, compared to suicide, 1.4%, in the US. It's just that poetry seldom leads to car accidents.
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