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Alert me (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp Alert me when it begins to slither towards my anus by leaving the prime
numbered floors lit on the elevator.
Up the ladder:
just am
Down the ladder:
lost souls
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Posted: October 27, 2005 12:24 PM PDT; Last modified: October 27, 2005 12:24 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9590 Comments:
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zodiac @ 217.144.7.195
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27-Oct-05/12:53 PM
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Is your name really JonathRon? How odd. It's like you're a science fiction character.
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
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30-Oct-05/6:17 AM
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I think I'll call him TJ on a throne. Sounds like a Disney channel movie.
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T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.252.229.185
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1-Nov-05/8:59 AM
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My aunt says it was a mix-up on my birth certificate, but my birthparents insist the interposed R is reminiscent of the traditional Latvian spelling: Jéuanaethroÿon.
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
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1-Nov-05/11:02 AM
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Sounds fine to me TJ.
Logistically impossible.
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