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Free verse № 132577

Alert me

by T. Jonathron Remp

Member since 2004 · Posted 27 Oct 2005 · 5 comments

Alert me when it begins to slither towards my anus by leaving the prime numbered floors lit on the elevator.

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5 comments

[n/a] zodiac 27-Oct-05/12:53 PM Reply
Is your name really JonathRon? How odd. It's like you're a science fiction character.
[n/a] ALChemy › zodiac 30-Oct-05/6:17 AM Reply
I think I'll call him TJ on a throne. Sounds like a Disney channel movie.
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp › zodiac 1-Nov-05/8:59 AM Reply
My aunt says it was a mix-up on my birth certificate, but my birthparents insist the interposed R is reminiscent of the traditional Latvian spelling: Jéuanaethroÿon.
[n/a] ALChemy › T. Jonathron Remp 1-Nov-05/11:02 AM Reply
Sounds fine to me TJ.
[5] Dovina 27-Oct-05/8:19 PM Reply
Logistically impossible.