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Alert me (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
Alert me when it begins to slither towards my anus by leaving the prime numbered floors lit on the elevator.

Up the ladder: save a class now
Down the ladder: It Still Hurts

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9634
Posted: October 27, 2005 12:24 PM PDT; Last modified: October 27, 2005 12:24 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 | 27-Oct-05/12:53 PM | Reply
Is your name really JonathRon? How odd. It's like you're a science fiction character.
[n/a] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > zodiac | 30-Oct-05/6:17 AM | Reply
I think I'll call him TJ on a throne. Sounds like a Disney channel movie.
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.252.229.185 > zodiac | 1-Nov-05/8:59 AM | Reply
My aunt says it was a mix-up on my birth certificate, but my birthparents insist the interposed R is reminiscent of the traditional Latvian spelling: Jéuanaethroÿon.
[n/a] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > T. Jonathron Remp | 1-Nov-05/11:02 AM | Reply
Sounds fine to me TJ.
[5] Dovina @ 209.247.222.84 | 27-Oct-05/8:19 PM | Reply
Logistically impossible.
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