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on a climb (Free verse) by nonee
On a climb to a mountain, took a deep breath.
Stopped, to think for a while
Will I ever cross it or see the other side,
Have been climbing this mountain for so long now
Still it seems so high ....
I don't think there can be other side
For I could have reached it by now .
Feeling is still there..
Am I still where I started from ..?
Maybe losing faith in me now ..
Losing all the hope in me,to see the other side .
Still the climb is so high
I can sit here and cry...
For I am losing the will to try.
No, but there is no other way out,
For that is all I have learnt,
To climb a mountain, that is so high,
This mountain of life
For my feet won't stop,
Untill I reach the other side....
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Posted: September 5, 2002 2:29 AM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2002 2:29 AM PDT
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