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on a climb (Free verse) by nonee
On a climb to a mountain, took a deep breath. Stopped, to think for a while Will I ever cross it or see the other side, Have been climbing this mountain for so long now Still it seems so high .... I don't think there can be other side For I could have reached it by now . Feeling is still there.. Am I still where I started from ..? Maybe losing faith in me now .. Losing all the hope in me,to see the other side . Still the climb is so high I can sit here and cry... For I am losing the will to try. No, but there is no other way out, For that is all I have learnt, To climb a mountain, that is so high, This mountain of life For my feet won't stop, Untill I reach the other side....

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