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Sinking (Ode) by flightoffancy
The blackness smacks me behind the eyeballs Unwelcome old friend Sucks the air from my body Leaves no joy to spend The dark stallion kneels beside me Against my will I mount Riding over the cliff, making peace with the devil Too many times to count

Up the ladder: Don't Love Me Anymore
Down the ladder: Love Redefined

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5020
Posted: October 17, 2005 8:39 PM PDT; Last modified: October 17, 2005 8:39 PM PDT
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