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Adieu (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17
I don’t wanna be Another forgotten memory Another name lost in the wind I refuse to become your victim So wash away that grin This simply can’t continue You're forcing me to leave I won’t allow you to use me Far scarred to the worst degree You've pushed and you've pulled But never again will you hold control I've already walked away from you My last remark, "Adieu."

Up the ladder: One or the Same
Down the ladder: The One I Threw Back

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5049
Posted: July 18, 2004 11:02 PM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2004 11:02 PM PDT
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[9] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.16 | 19-Jul-04/12:02 AM | Reply
good poem -9-
[n/a] cuddlytiger17 @ 209.105.138.106 > electroman1979 | 19-Jul-04/10:13 AM | Reply
Thanks. :)
[7] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 > electroman1979 | 19-Jul-04/10:21 AM | Reply
I agree. I wish you would read my poem, "Sacrament" again and my comment to you.
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