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muted muffability

by calliope

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 Oct 2005 · 2 comments

me; i want you hapless harbinger hastily stretched out in the sink basin. cartridges crystals contained in their bare moodless posture. me; i told you hungry hospital hacked up into pieces. tree sap. mason work for a pillow fight.

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[n/a] ALChemy 14-Oct-05/11:59 AM Reply
Holy cow! I hope you don't have halitosis when someone has to hear you read this to him or her.
[10] zodiac 15-Oct-05/5:53 AM Reply
Everything except the semicolon is great. Nice one.