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muted muffability (Free verse) by calliope me; i want you
hapless harbinger
hastily stretched out
in the sink
basin.
cartridges
crystals contained
in their
bare
moodless
posture.
me; i told you
hungry hospital
hacked up into
pieces.
tree sap.
mason work for a
pillow fight.
Up the ladder:
Get Over It
Down the ladder:
Ein Kampf
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Posted: October 14, 2005 2:27 AM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2005 2:27 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5774 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
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14-Oct-05/11:59 AM
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Holy cow! I hope you don't have halitosis when someone has to hear you read this to him or her.
Everything except the semicolon is great. Nice one.
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