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muted muffability (Free verse) by calliope
me; i want you hapless harbinger hastily stretched out in the sink basin. cartridges crystals contained in their bare moodless posture. me; i told you hungry hospital hacked up into pieces. tree sap. mason work for a pillow fight.

Up the ladder: I want my money back...
Down the ladder: it's damp after closing

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5767
Posted: October 14, 2005 2:27 AM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2005 2:27 AM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 14-Oct-05/11:59 AM | Reply
Holy cow! I hope you don't have halitosis when someone has to hear you read this to him or her.
[10] zodiac @ 213.186.183.100 | 15-Oct-05/5:53 AM | Reply
Everything except the semicolon is great. Nice one.
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