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False Reality (Free verse) by jlynnwall False Reality
(still very unfinished)
When you told me this was a false reality
I begged for truth so I could throw it back at you
The truth's icy fingers linger in words unspoken
Hiding behind skewed memories
Getting lost in numerous shades of drawn conclusions
Blindly peering back and seeing only my fantasy's mirage
Up the ladder:
Love has been awoke. (edited, needs new title)
Down the ladder:
self-righteousness
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Posted: September 29, 2005 7:31 AM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2005 7:31 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8013287 Overall Rank: 11099 Comments:
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Tintagiles @ 207.179.148.21
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2-Oct-05/10:50 AM
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Unfinished indeed. Ask me again when it's done. And have a five, as it doesn't matter either way, which is the proper thing to do to drafts.
I like shades of drawn conclusions. Keep working on it.
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