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False Reality

by jlynnwall

Member since 2005 · Posted 29 Sep 2005 · 2 comments

False Reality (still very unfinished) When you told me this was a false reality I begged for truth so I could throw it back at you The truth's icy fingers linger in words unspoken Hiding behind skewed memories Getting lost in numerous shades of drawn conclusions Blindly peering back and seeing only my fantasy's mirage

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[5] Tintagiles 2-Oct-05/10:50 AM Reply
Unfinished indeed. Ask me again when it's done. And have a five, as it doesn't matter either way, which is the proper thing to do to drafts.
[5] wilco 2-Oct-05/8:26 PM Reply
I like shades of drawn conclusions. Keep working on it.