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False Reality (Free verse) by jlynnwall

False Reality (still very unfinished) When you told me this was a false reality I begged for truth so I could throw it back at you The truth's icy fingers linger in words unspoken Hiding behind skewed memories Getting lost in numerous shades of drawn conclusions Blindly peering back and seeing only my fantasy's mirage

wilco 2-Oct-05/8:26 PM
I like shades of drawn conclusions. Keep working on it.




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