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My Name Is (Free verse) by hottemper26 Today my name is dreamer, lost and clueless.
Yesterday my name was crying, helpless and trapped.
During the storm my name is free, like the tears the sky cries.
Underneath the stars my name is wind, floating with no direction yet
down the right path.
In my dream my name was romance, running away with the shadow of the
night.
Tomorrow my name will be faith, ready to take on whatever adventure
comes my way.
Up the ladder:
Wondering
Down the ladder:
Lost
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Posted: September 18, 2005 5:39 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2005 5:39 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8102965 Overall Rank: 10957 Comments:
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ALChemy @ 65.188.89.69
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19-Sep-05/1:49 AM
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But when will your name be poet?
I'd break it up into line/indented line. Like this:
Today my name is dreamer, Lost and clueless It would probably make it a bit better. Not much, but a bit. 156 view(s)
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