June

Member since 2005 · Posted 13 Sep 2005 · 1 comment

Small glimmering bodies of light Catch your attention More than the black mass behind That we all know too well I am no more than a beast I can hide But not from these problems And never from you So I lie I know that he loves me, and now that he knows You don't get what you wanted "I'm sorry" I say I lie "But don't the stars look nice tonight?"

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[5] wilco 13-Sep-05/7:31 PM Reply

Once again, you could probably say this in about half the lines and it's actually be more effective.