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June (Free verse) by Muffinly Small glimmering bodies of light
Catch your attention
More than the black mass behind
That we all know too well
I am no more than a beast
I can hide
But not from these problems
And never from you
So I lie
I know that he loves me, and now that he knows
You don't get what you wanted
"I'm sorry" I say
I lie
"But don't the stars look nice tonight?"
Up the ladder:
The sparrow
Down the ladder:
A Mid-Saturday in June
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Posted: September 13, 2005 2:18 PM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2005 2:18 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8814354 Overall Rank: 9989 Comments:
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wilco @ 66.61.101.130
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13-Sep-05/7:31 PM
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Once again, you could probably say this in about half the lines and it's actually be more effective.
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