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to all of you (Free verse) by Heather Dee
I write and I write but still no luck
Iâm starting to not give a fuck
The words I have in my mind
are generic, adolescent, but still I try.
Constructive remarks quite unkind
Sitting frustrated I let out a sigh.
A sigh of relief
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9195
Posted: September 12, 2005 9:55 PM PDT; Last modified: September 12, 2005 9:55 PM PDT
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Start with free-verse it's easier to pull off.
Read some of the masters.
Find those poems that speak to you and study them and there authors to death.
Use cheats like dictionaries, thesauruses and rhymezone.com.
Then decide you don't give a fuck what the assholes think and write on.