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to all of you (Free verse) by Heather Dee

I write and I write but still no luck I’m starting to not give a fuck The words I have in my mind are generic, adolescent, but still I try. Constructive remarks quite unkind Sitting frustrated I let out a sigh. A sigh of relief

ALChemy 13-Sep-05/2:37 AM
Consider yourself lucky if you get constructive remarks. Alot of people here just want to make fun of others.
Start with free-verse it's easier to pull off.
Read some of the masters.
Find those poems that speak to you and study them and there authors to death.
Use cheats like dictionaries, thesauruses and rhymezone.com.
Then decide you don't give a fuck what the assholes think and write on.




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