tanka(4)

Member since 2005 · Posted 20 Aug 2005 · 3 comments

crumbling brick wall graffitied with odd colors it's been there forever a stone chips away some paint moon shines, wind blows quietly

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[n/a] ALChemy 20-Aug-05/10:07 AM Reply

Your welca(1)

[8] impert&ent 20-Aug-05/12:15 PM Reply

I see some lines I like.
Some lines I'd like to play with too.

[9] Sasha 21-Aug-05/3:53 PM Reply

very contemporary with the flavor of the japanese masters. nice