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tanka(4) (Free verse) by shadows

crumbling brick wall graffitied with odd colors it's been there forever a stone chips away some paint moon shines, wind blows quietly

impert&ent 20-Aug-05/12:15 PM
I see some lines I like.
Some lines I'd like to play with too.





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