poemranker ::IN THESE DREAMS FOREVER by prettyktm

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IN THESE DREAMS FOREVER

Member since 2005 · Posted 25 Jul 2005 · 0 comments

Hold me,closer to your heart And you'll hear one heartbeat And I've been waiting All my lie For this one night And I've been holding my breath Just to call your name When we make love So don't hold back 'Cause we ain't doing nothing wrong And you know I love you And that's the only thing I wanna do Till I'm alive Touch me down deeper Till you reach my soul Let me sealed your lips with mine It's much sweeter then any wine Don't talk about the end I wanna stay in this dream forever In these dreams forever Don't wake me up Just keep on making love to me Till I cry sweet pain of tears Till I slip away To my last sleep In your arms.

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