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IN THESE DREAMS FOREVER (Free verse) by prettyktm
Hold me,closer to your heart And you'll hear one heartbeat And I've been waiting All my lie For this one night And I've been holding my breath Just to call your name When we make love So don't hold back 'Cause we ain't doing nothing wrong And you know I love you And that's the only thing I wanna do Till I'm alive Touch me down deeper Till you reach my soul Let me sealed your lips with mine It's much sweeter then any wine Don't talk about the end I wanna stay in this dream forever In these dreams forever Don't wake me up Just keep on making love to me Till I cry sweet pain of tears Till I slip away To my last sleep In your arms.

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10772
Posted: July 25, 2005 2:31 AM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2005 2:31 AM PDT
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