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Summer of Firsts (Lyric) by Miggy
I felt like giving up by the day’s end Too many relationships that ended up dead But you taught me just to stay true I followed your advice and it led me to you (Bridge) Oh, I looked so far Yet right next to me you came to be My shooting star (Chorus) In this summer of firsts I learned how to trust again This summer of firsts The bubble won’t burst For I’m breaking my cursed trend This summer of firsts Full of fun and love This summer of firsts There’s no need to be with flirts Though without you I still need to find the one The smile on your face lightened my heart And I dreaded every moment we were apart I felt warm being around your innocence And you could tell by all my randomness (Bridge) (Chorus) And I just wanna say thanks For every breath you take Letting me live a bit happier Oh, did I look so far Yet right next to me At least for the moment You came to be My everlasting shooting star (Chorus/Ending)

Up the ladder: Honesty
Down the ladder: Do Something

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8476
Posted: July 22, 2005 7:28 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2005 7:28 PM PDT
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[6] Dovina @ 84.173.251.118 | 24-Jul-05/6:32 AM | Reply
Beware! This looks too much like deception!
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