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Ursa's Tail (Free verse) by bamf909 This constellation holds
no consolation in its vastness-- bleak vacuum stares
open-mouthed at me, swallowing my reflection, reciprocating never.
stargazing, many things become one-way streets,
paved alongside brilliant flashes,
but still I freeze,
infrequent streetlamps not enough keep me warm.
Up the ladder:
Riding High On My Ignore List
Down the ladder:
Look Love
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Posted: July 12, 2005 12:06 AM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2005 12:06 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.3073616 Overall Rank: 3645 Comments:
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Dovina @ 69.175.32.185
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12-Jul-05/9:55 AM
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The first three lines are good, then the image seems to break down.
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