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Uncorked (Other) by impert&ent
It fell over Nothing of value Moose Hat, Buffalo Leap I hope you enjoyed the music.

Up the ladder: Oh well, shit happens

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.6666666
Weighted score: 4.602657
Overall Rank: 12453
Posted: June 30, 2005 2:08 PM PDT; Last modified: July 1, 2005 4:04 PM PDT
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[5] Dovina @ 12.72.6.245 | 30-Jun-05/3:59 PM | Reply
Go home alone? The ending is weak if all you mean is that you unscrewed a bottle cap.
[5] Dovina @ 12.72.4.83 | 2-Jul-05/6:18 AM | Reply
You have totally changed the poem and called it an edit. I think it's better to post a new poem.

Anyway, this depends on a reader's knowledge of allusions. Maybe it means something to someone else.
[2] Nuit @ 86.128.161.224 > Dovina | 4-Jul-05/5:33 AM | Reply
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