poemranker ::Uncorked by impert&ent

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Uncorked

by impert&ent

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Jun 2005 · Edited 1 Jul 2005 · 3 comments

It fell over Nothing of value Moose Hat, Buffalo Leap I hope you enjoyed the music.

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3 comments

[5] Dovina 30-Jun-05/3:59 PM Reply
Go home alone? The ending is weak if all you mean is that you unscrewed a bottle cap.
[5] Dovina 2-Jul-05/6:18 AM Reply
You have totally changed the poem and called it an edit. I think it's better to post a new poem.

Anyway, this depends on a reader's knowledge of allusions. Maybe it means something to someone else.
[2] Nuit › Dovina 4-Jul-05/5:33 AM Reply
Did you send this comment to the right person!?!