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Uncorked (Other) by impert&ent It fell over
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Moose Hat, Buffalo Leap
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Posted: June 30, 2005 2:08 PM PDT; Last modified: July 1, 2005 4:04 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.602657 Overall Rank: 12502 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.6.245
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30-Jun-05/3:59 PM
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Go home alone? The ending is weak if all you mean is that you unscrewed a bottle cap.
You have totally changed the poem and called it an edit. I think it's better to post a new poem.
Anyway, this depends on a reader's knowledge of allusions. Maybe it means something to someone else.
Did you send this comment to the right person!?!
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