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It fell over Nothing of value Moose Hat, Buffalo Leap I hope you enjoyed the music.

Dovina 2-Jul-05/6:18 AM
You have totally changed the poem and called it an edit. I think it's better to post a new poem.

Anyway, this depends on a reader's knowledge of allusions. Maybe it means something to someone else.




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