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wasn't ready (Free verse) by hendrimike
time to turn this whole thing around
living with disgusting frowns
try elevating my head up high
until this becomes a smile of mine
the constant worry of what has been
leaving me dank in my lonesome bed
sitting and pondering two more steps
when i fell down here to begin with
i was living in a tree you see
and i floated away one day
landed on my feet and snap
i cannot ever get back
what will happen to me
now that i have left my family
jumped to quick i guess
wish to fly back to the nest
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10702
Posted: June 27, 2005 9:38 PM PDT; Last modified: June 27, 2005 9:38 PM PDT
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