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My Sun (Ode) by Signature
I am a sun.
I am the son, of my sun.
My sun shines through me.
My sun is a son, to his sun.
I will be the sun to my son.
I shall luminate my ultra-voilet ways unto him...
My "Sunways", my nutrients,
As well as my sweltering heat.
See I am the source of life on Mother Earth.
Without my sun's shine,
There is no way I could appreciate the true essence of my son's rise.
Without my sunshine, my son can't shine.
So shine bright suns.
For sons rise at the end of every night...
And with our sunshine, there can be shone bright sonlight!
Da1 Lamarr Osborne
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Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10705
Posted: May 21, 2004 12:04 AM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2004 12:05 AM PDT
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