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To Whom I Have Not Long Written (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Can't you see inside of me? Though lacking certain scrutinies? Like those that come from luxury, Or all oustanding felonies. For long I write of that which writing Makes it seem much more inviting. But it all shall seem unwell, When realization hits and swells, That everything long everlasting Has no burden like lives constrasting.

Up the ladder: Unwanted
Down the ladder: You

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.25
Weighted score: 4.552989
Overall Rank: 12665
Posted: June 27, 2005 9:04 PM PDT; Last modified: June 27, 2005 9:04 PM PDT
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[3] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 27-Jun-05/9:12 PM | Reply
The opening line is off-putting because of the obvious answer.
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