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OutsideThe Window (Free verse) by Flaithri
My skin not getting any younger
My faith still strong
In my heart is peace
Contented in my life
Just when the sun rays
Given me a fresh note
About the move outside
Of the neighborhood's
Different footsteps
Some familiar laughter
Both from familiar strangers
and brother or sister
Extending each other's arms to greet
Simple touch of purity
What gives sense of the yesterdays
Blending with tenderness or loveliness
Though just ordinary pleasures
Like how one wins her heart
Became the most precious treasure
Right outside this window grill
There's a memory of the day before yesterday
My heart, my youth.
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Weighted score: 5.230521
Overall Rank: 4212
Posted: September 2, 2002 4:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2002 4:56 AM PDT
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