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Thinking of you (Free verse) by savannah
As each day goes by I still stop and think of you, Before I got o bed your the last thing on my mind. When I wake up your still the first thing I think of. I???m going to miss you more than I thought. You weren???t just my first love but you were kind of my best friend too. Some one I could trust with my feelings and thoughts. You???re just so different from al the rest. I???m sorry for treating you bad sometimes, And I???m sorry for not doing some of the thing I should have done, But there???s one thing i'm not sorry for, And that is, loving you every day that I did And for everyday that I will, that is still to come. No matter where I am, Or how long it has been. No matter what, There will always be a spot in my heart, That is just for???. YOU!!!

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.857143
Weighted score: 5.230521
Overall Rank: 4213
Posted: September 5, 2002 5:44 PM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2002 5:44 PM PDT
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[8] deleted user @ 64.12.96.237 | 1-Dec-02/7:30 AM | Reply
this is nice work, i think it sumarizes how lots of people feel, keep writin, i especially liked the first stanza
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