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capital punishment (Free verse) by hendrimike
this time i have not returned from hell
and this one time i can honestly tell
what you have sentenced me too is grief
and the lies i give you make me a thief
in a world gone mad, i am the king
it may be sad, but i am the king
standing upright i watch it crumble
with words in my head i start to mumble
clearly i yell, let's get out
but my legs aren't with it and i sit and shout
it's all over now
i realize facts as truths
and i plead and beg
and think back to my youth
when i ran around aimlessly and laughed and played
and thought of games that only i could play
where did it go off the beaten path
was it my fault, or just shit in the past?
that boy can't hear me
not anymore
this guy in my head
now runs the store
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11152
Posted: June 9, 2005 9:28 PM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2005 7:58 AM PDT
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