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Alcohol (Other) by tisa7
Vomite in your hair clammy cold skin shaking with sweat all about the clang of your neckalace against that large metal pot sickness increased by the spinning of your world the regret for in the morning when the sun is bright and you dont want the light


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Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11103
Posted: June 21, 2007 10:23 PM PDT; Last modified: June 21, 2007 10:23 PM PDT
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[9] drnick @ 24.247.158.152 | 21-Jun-07/10:40 PM | Reply
Awesome, I'll print this out and bring it with me to the bathroom in the morning. You know the cure for a hangover is smoking weed.
[n/a] Ranger @ 86.145.28.29 > drnick | 22-Jun-07/2:10 AM | Reply
A good friend of mine got utterly wrecked one night but woke up the next morning feeling fine. Due to the laws of equilibrium, his housemate, who had not touched a drop all night, got the hangover by proxy. True story. Even the god of alcohol seems to enjoy a laugh.
[n/a] lmp @ 141.154.134.3 > Ranger | 22-Jun-07/7:40 AM | Reply
from monty python's holy grail: "no, really, pull the other one."
[n/a] Ranger @ 217.41.217.24 > lmp | 22-Jun-07/1:05 PM | Reply
"...it has got bells on it".
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