poemranker ::no rashes by calliope

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Free verse № 126287

no rashes

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Jun 2005 · 2 comments

i tried to write something for you but the initials on the pen that i used were not my own, and i felt like i might just be plagiarizing. so instead, i sewed up a blanket for you with needles and yarn i bought myself, so be warm, and remember my last goodbyes were displaced, i'm still wrapped around you.

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[10] zodiac 6-Jun-05/6:03 AM Reply
How unfortunate for you. My initials actually are B.I.C.
[6] deleted user 6-Jun-05/11:49 AM Reply
This isn't so bad. Hold on to the idea and try for a different approach.