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no rashes (Free verse) by calliope
i tried to write something for you but the initials on the pen that i used were not my own, and i felt like i might just be plagiarizing. so instead, i sewed up a blanket for you with needles and yarn i bought myself, so be warm, and remember my last goodbyes were displaced, i'm still wrapped around you.

Up the ladder: Narcolepsy
Down the ladder: Dublin, 4-10-04

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7803
Posted: June 5, 2005 1:17 AM PDT; Last modified: June 5, 2005 1:17 AM PDT
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[10] zodiac @ 194.165.132.42 | 6-Jun-05/6:03 AM | Reply
How unfortunate for you. My initials actually are B.I.C.
[6] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 6-Jun-05/11:49 AM | Reply
This isn't so bad. Hold on to the idea and try for a different approach.
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