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Sweetness (Other) by swift_enterprises
Sweetness is a sour cider Distilled on tongues in casks of fibers Tighter bound than gravity, Which wets the lips that set it free.

Up the ladder: Soft Speak; Hard Emotion
Down the ladder: How Dare You Knock?

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3076925
Weighted score: 5.305633
Overall Rank: 3652
Posted: May 10, 2002 6:41 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 6:41 AM PDT
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[7] nentwined @ | 10-May-02/9:09 AM | Reply
I rather like this. short, simple, sweet (and sour?)
[1] hoopoe @ 62.254.32.4 | 19-May-02/3:08 AM | Reply
yer what???
[6] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 5-Aug-02/6:50 PM | Reply
Fuck yerself Mr. spock. Bones, analysis! Well Jim, all of the women on this planet seem to have three breasts, and hardly any STD's. Tell Chekov and Scotty to bring the tents and briquettes! I the name of Science, man!
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