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Sweetness

by swift_enterprises

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 3 comments

Sweetness is a sour cider Distilled on tongues in casks of fibers Tighter bound than gravity, Which wets the lips that set it free.

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[7] nentwined 10-May-02/9:09 AM Reply
I rather like this. short, simple, sweet (and sour?)
[1] hoopoe 19-May-02/3:08 AM Reply
yer what???
[6] Bachus 5-Aug-02/6:50 PM Reply
Fuck yerself Mr. spock. Bones, analysis! Well Jim, all of the women on this planet seem to have three breasts, and hardly any STD's. Tell Chekov and Scotty to bring the tents and briquettes! I the name of Science, man!