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The Tourist (Free verse) by gzt
Below the blather of the turning tourists, I drink the murmur above the river, the thin sound around the daughter's water at the chateau Chinonceau, by the crowded lonely crown prince's four-post bed.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 3.825604
Overall Rank: 13475
Posted: May 10, 2002 6:30 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 6:46 AM PDT
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[5]... anonymous @ 204.245.176.100 | 13-May-02/1:06 PM | Reply
crowded lonely....... nice
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