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the first sight is everything (Free verse) by sungoesdown
All light escapes as the last nail settles into place. I. I feel a board half of a foot In front of my face, But the echoes of my breathing Sound distant as they bounce around this box. Foolish to attempt escape. Currently, a sniper stands Six feet above me, Ready to trade A last look For one between the eyes. I could feel the weight Of this soil blanket Long before I was tucked in. Helpless now, I settle for sleep And dream only of waking up. II. The worms are whispering As I finally awake. They tell me the end is near, That I should return to sleep Where everything will be painless. Wanting more than anything To feel something, I hold my eyelids open, Apologize to my companions For not following advice And brace myself. III. I feel like a feather As I hear a knock. Come in, I cry, But this door is locked tight. We hold hands through Three inches of cedar; I'll push, you pull. The first nail budges, The rest follow suit... The freshest air Is saved for the free man, But before I enjoy a breath, I kiss her smiling lips And find myself in her eyes. When my tears hit the ground, I was thanking the Earth.

Up the ladder: Nightmares Of Yesterday
Down the ladder: i spin you like a top

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10310
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 8, 2005 11:58 PM PDT
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