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Just Another Poem (Free verse) by Damien
How distant are these minds
Are they connected as I write?
From my transmitter to your receiver
From your receiver to the great teacher
This figure of mass opinion
Leaving life in this dominion
Confusing sentences reaching destinations
Creations acknowledged throughout all nations
Purposes are born and statuses shown
A feeling of being needed is surely grown
One life of nothing, anotherâs dream
A surprise of something it did not seem
The human race on the bridge of evolution
Constantly learning, fleeing confusion
Seeking logics behind meaningless paths
Slightly backtracking with unneeded Maths
With the present being the only time we make a choice
I am begging to people of the world, be free and rejoice
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4889
Posted: May 3, 2005 7:24 AM PDT; Last modified: May 3, 2005 7:24 AM PDT
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