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Spellbound (Free verse) by binglesbangles We lie with each other
Side by side and silent
Our noses touching
Gentle breathing
Totally aware
Completely comfortable
My first love and I
Shows me new experiences
As I show him
Feelings I have never known
Feel them now in abundance
I close my eyes
Feel him
Smell him
Spellbound in his aura
Peacefull in this moment
Up the ladder:
So Much**coment this sucks. I want to make it better
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Posted: April 8, 2005 3:01 PM PDT; Last modified: April 8, 2005 3:01 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.905148 Overall Rank: 9781 119 view(s)
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