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a poem to a friend (Free verse) by that_funny_girl
Here I am again putting my life down for you on a page or a screen to be precise. I don’t know what it is that compels me to tell you everything about me when I hardly know you. But in retrospect it's actually nice to have a friend, out there who won’t judge you at all. It's funny, but I'd always imagined that someday I'd stay up all night giving my secrets away to someone while watching the stars. Take a way the stars and add, perhaps, an asterisk instead and this is pretty good you know. I love this talking to you the exchange of lols, and the occasional thing that goes a little deeper. So yeah, im me when you're around and we'll chat again my friend. I am glad I know you

Up the ladder: The Last of The Winds
Down the ladder: lost in the riptide

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7819
Posted: April 1, 2005 3:33 PM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2005 3:33 PM PST
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[10] francis nor capule @ 12.129.230.11 | 1-Apr-05/5:35 PM | Reply
i know the feeling.well penned!
[3] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 4.224.24.228 | 2-Apr-05/1:57 AM | Reply
Heaven Help Us, poetry about Instant Messaging. Like what a totally incredibly rad awesome amazing Idea! What's next, poems about blogs and cell phone text? This reeks of Jr. High School. Good feelings to have and all, but crap for verse. -3- Because its at least poetic, somewhat, by a stretch.

<3 Jason
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