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Late night (Free verse) by blindwriter
The door is that way And it opens both ways I know it's kind of musty in here But I'm holding the door open for you... So if you stand there you'll get must Even if you don't come in. Get in or beat it. Congratulations on your find I know it isn't all it's made out to be And I don't blame you for wondering If it was all worth it, or not But here it is...no point in lying about it. I wish you had been able to tell from the beginning That I was making it all up...just so you would look.

Up the ladder: Mirror Mirror
Down the ladder: Moving On

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8069
Posted: March 30, 2005 2:22 AM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2005 2:22 AM PST
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