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Back Home (Lyric) by alvinb
Something pulled me under I don't know I'm not alone Wishing for the night to light My way back to my home Nothing else will help me So I choose to walk alone I've darken to the night And then I losed to what I've known Pulling me below I know that it is not my home I'm lost in the nightlight And I've lost all that I know Taking me down slowly Never saw my way back home Over all becoming The destruction of my home

Down the ladder: Perfect

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8024
Posted: September 17, 2007 7:59 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2007 7:59 PM PDT
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