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Yeah (Haiku) by Skamper I don't hate god
I don't hate dogs either
just their owners
Up the ladder:
friend
Down the ladder:
Windfarm
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Posted: May 19, 2007 4:08 PM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2007 4:08 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 8033 Comments:
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nypoet22 @ 74.225.66.5
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20-May-07/11:40 AM
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who owns God? interesting work, though your syllabic form is off. if the 5-7-5 were intact this would be senryu.
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Skamper @ 202.6.130.239
> nypoet22
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20-May-07/6:33 PM
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who owns god...not me - I don't even keep a dog
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