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Til' Dawn (Free verse) by Dreammaker1024
The dark midnight sky is clearing into a new day, and I think back on
how I left you early this morning. In bed, layed out and peaceful like
a child. I didn't want to loosen myself from your embrace, but duty
called. Never have I felt the way I felt when I was leaving you behind
to dream of our plans. All I could feel was such utter love for the man
I had learned to share my bed with at every given chance we were able to
spend in each others arms, dreaming together. I count down the hours,
the minutes, the seconds, til' I'll be able to be back in your
protection. The night prior to us falling in ourselves was the
beginning of a beautiful relationship, with happiness, sorrow and joy to
be expected. Even with the sorrow from that night, I can only look back
on it with happiness at the step we took in the musical dark. At this
moment I can smell your very essance surrounding me, and I feel
incomplete. Soon though, when the sun hits full rise, I'll be with you,
and think back on how much I missed you.
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Overall Rank: 8589
Posted: March 29, 2005 1:47 AM PST; Last modified: March 29, 2005 1:47 AM PST
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