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The Ususal Love Stuff (Free verse) by Dreammaker1024
With you Iâm real, with you Iâm nervous, with you Iâm better, Iâ
m me. Your presence is a caress on my hearts string, playing the
sweetest melody known unto my musically inclined soul. In a life
constantly changing youâve been that one force that has been the same
unto me, a feeling force of passion that has never dulled in time. Love
has never been a utterance that has escaped my lips with truth, but when
conversing with my friends and Iâm asked if my feelings are real, if
their true, I can only help but tell them how much Iâm beyond a doubt
in love with you.
With me your real, with me your a mystery, with me your my own.
Through time youâve been an elusive prize that I canât seem to win.
Over the years youâve chosen everyone but me, looking everywhere,
loving everyone. I canât help but stay, praying down on bended knee
and through parted lips that one day youâd realize that your search
can be concluded with me. At night when everyone has fallen into their
dreams, Iâm lying in the dark imagining the day when you could fall
for me in truth. Iâve tasted the sweetness of us and now I canât
envision not having that sweetness touch my heart once more.
Together weâre a story of many pains, and happy moments of where they
always out weigh my moments of sadness. I canât imagine a pair more
distinct and more involved. We argue continuously yet that's a welcome
disagreement that always ends in a passion that could never be taken
away from my soul. My love abounds all moments of insecurity that I
might feel when I think of our disagreements and your past and present
relationships. Iâm stuck in you and canât seem to move away from
this bond that we share, that keeps me locked into your warmth. I crave
for your hugs, I crave for you, my one deadly sin that I canât seem to
repent for, to let go of but as long as your true to yourself I will not
move from the embrace that you hold on my life.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9073
Posted: March 16, 2005 11:05 PM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2005 11:05 PM PST
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Just try to say it with a lot less words.