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Still Alone

Member since 2004 · Posted 24 Feb 2005 · 2 comments

I'm here at school. Looking out the window. Waiting to go home. Waiting for someone to make me cry. Later in my life. I see myself alone. I see myself famous. I really don't know. Well here I am. Still in school, Siting at a table of four. I have three other people with me, But I'm still alone.

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[3] Fearlesfan_04 24-Feb-05/6:48 PM Reply

you don't need to feel that way...but the poem was ok keep writing

[n/a] RION12 › Fearlesfan_04 24-Feb-05/7:01 PM Reply

Thanks. I only feel that way when I am sad and at the time I wrote the poem I was very unset.