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Still Alone (Free verse) by RION12 I'm here at school.
Looking out the window.
Waiting to go home.
Waiting for someone to make me cry.
Later in my life.
I see myself alone.
I see myself famous.
I really don't know.
Well here I am.
Still in school,
Siting at a table of four.
I have three other people with me,
But I'm still alone.
Up the ladder:
love's jealousy
Down the ladder:
finally i say goodbye
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Posted: February 24, 2005 6:38 PM PST; Last modified: February 24, 2005 6:38 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9403987 Overall Rank: 9096 Comments:
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Fearlesfan_04 @ 129.66.1.202
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24-Feb-05/6:48 PM
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you don't need to feel that way...but the poem was ok keep writing
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RION12 @ 64.136.26.226
> Fearlesfan_04
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24-Feb-05/7:01 PM
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Thanks. I only feel that way when I am sad and at the time I wrote the poem I was very unset.
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