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The green mile (Other) by Ming T. Merciless I picked,
and Have found.
Up the ladder:
Colour Town
Down the ladder:
Mantis
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 2.25
Posted: August 29, 2002 7:37 AM PDT; Last modified: August 29, 2002 7:37 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.2604113 Overall Rank: 13181 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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29-Aug-02/12:34 PM
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i'm that much closer to god having read this. thanks dick head 10/0!
Have mercy on us, Ming. Methinks thine titles exceed thine poemes in interestingnecessity.
You're crap.
You, my ladd, could stand to learn something from Settle. Not only was his childish poetry more finely formed than yours, but he was able to respond to absurd personal attacks with sneering rage, as opposed to the weak, you-too retaliation of Ming T... See me after class.
Oh dear. Having been impressed by some of your earlier work, I feel only disappointment having read this dire effort. 1/10. Come on Ming, surely you can do better than this!
This is much more a statement than a poem. You strike me as someone attempting to be arty and intelligent, but sadly lack the necessary brains to do so. Have a 1.
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