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Colour Town

by Everyone

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 May 2004 · 1 comment

Walking through Colour Town, Down streets smelling of Chinamen, Down streets smelling of Mexicans, Down streets smelling of Blacks, Down streets smelling of Jews, I feel an unbearable ache And wonder Which street is yours?

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[10] zodiac 19-May-04/7:37 AM Reply
Attn: Nicholas Jones -

Why do you think this poem deserved a 2, rather than a 1 or 0? Was it the line "I feel an unbearable ache"?