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Colour Town
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Cinquain
) by
Everyone
Walking through Colour Town, Down streets smelling of Chinamen, Down streets smelling of Mexicans, Down streets smelling of Blacks, Down streets smelling of Jews, I feel an unbearable ache And wonder Which street is yours?
zodiac
19-May-04/7:37 AM
Attn: Nicholas Jones -
Why do you think this poem deserved a 2, rather than a 1 or 0? Was it the line "I feel an unbearable ache"?
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