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Tra-la-la (Free verse) by Lifeboatman
You insist that I frolick with you
In this Garden of Eden you have set up in your backyard
But I don't frolick, sweetheart. I stutter,
While you hit me with your old school love
Like a new age enlightenment
And how classic your emotions can be
Like the Bard at his worst while drunk with ale
Or an Italian painter at his orgasm
Dear lady, how you swoon me with your haves and have-nots
That I look at you in contrast with you past
YOu were a hot chick then
And now you are pregnant with my ideas
And in your birth canal grows the concept of my desire
The desire to be with you until nothing is left
But you and me
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9068
Posted: January 13, 2005 4:19 AM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2005 4:19 AM PST
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Yeast, and about nothing else.