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The End (Other) by DarkThirteens
I know it's unexpected, you thought things were just fine. But then you found that you had crossed that fine and fragile line. I remember every second, of that torment I went through. I thought you actually loved me back when I said, "I love you." You played me like it was a game and told me not to fear. For when I needed hope or joy, you said you would be here. I never thought you'd lie to me or betray me like you did. You were my only savior so I gave all from within. You took it all with greed and pride. I saw you play the part. The boy I loved over life itself was ripping out my heart. You took me just for granted like I was yours for life. You didn't see the end was near until you found my knife. Now I'm gone and I don't know what life has brought to you. I pray you have not found another and shattered her dreams too.


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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6398
Posted: January 6, 2005 7:54 AM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2005 7:54 AM PST
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