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Darkness In Disguise (Free verse) by Stacy Stewart
You think that I am innocent any my purity comes from the heart, However I have so many secrets therefore tell so many lies. I am darkness in disguise. I will charm you with my smile, hypnotize you with my charm. Send you to insanity, until your world turns upside down. I'll watch you like a hawk as you are my prey. I'm going to get to know you in every possible way. Your secrets will become my thoughts your weakness will become my playground. I will destroy you and use you; break you down until you have no self-esteem. You'll have no where to run. You'll have no where to hide. Because everywhere you'll turn I'll be in your mind. And when you think you've found a way to stop me in my tracks, My game will only worsen and you'll become my past. So if I were you I'd pack up my bags and leave, Turn and run never make conversation with me; because in the end I’ll be in your dreams, Haunting and taunting you to the extreme. I will tear you apart and push you aside. And when you think it’s over I'll eat you alive. I'll sit back and laugh watching you whither away. And as your world is collapsing and you've come to your end. A new victim has just arrived I am darkness in disguise.

Up the ladder: Panama
Down the ladder: Echo On The Rocks

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4071
Posted: January 3, 2005 9:38 AM PST; Last modified: January 3, 2005 9:38 AM PST
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[8] Dovina @ | 3-Jan-05/4:36 PM | Reply
Could do without Verse 5, otherwise pretty good. Sounds like Satin talking.
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