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my poetic thought (Free verse) by amanda3
Shallow is the soul, whose feelings are locked up so that no kiss shall ever spring the latch Sorrow fills the heart that will accept no touch to melt the Winter everlasting.. Empty is the mind that will not part with the judgment of others, for they are consumed with criticism. Lonely is the body that recoils from human kindness, for it is solitary. Weeping are the heavens for they are watching their children suffer so.

Up the ladder: inverse square
Down the ladder: ........

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8774
Posted: November 20, 2004 6:23 PM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2004 6:23 PM PST
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[8] travelingsk8er @ 68.7.187.148 | 28-Nov-04/5:52 PM | Reply
disconnected but flowing at the same time....nice
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