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my poetic thought (Free verse) by amanda3
Shallow is the soul, whose feelings are locked up so that no kiss shall
ever spring the latch
Sorrow fills the heart that will accept no touch to melt the Winter
everlasting..
Empty is the mind that will not part with the judgment of others, for
they are consumed with criticism.
Lonely is the body that recoils from human kindness, for it is solitary.
Weeping are the heavens for they are watching their children suffer so.
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Posted: November 20, 2004 6:23 PM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2004 6:23 PM PST
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