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Lies (Free verse) by RION12 Everyone thinks I'm going to hurt you.
But that so not true.
I love you.
I would never hurt you.
No matter what happens.
My heart will always belong to you.
Every one can say what they want.
But don't listen.
There all lies.
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Posted: November 9, 2004 8:20 PM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2004 8:20 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8569565 Overall Rank: 10476 Comments:
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deleted user @ 172.191.225.77
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11-Nov-04/6:54 AM
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Not good. Very basic and lifeless as a corpse.
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RION12 @ 64.136.26.226
> deleted user
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15-Dec-04/2:45 PM
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If you think mine are bad.Show me some of yours to see if yours are bad.
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