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Lies (Free verse) by RION12
Everyone thinks I'm going to hurt you. But that so not true. I love you. I would never hurt you. No matter what happens. My heart will always belong to you. Every one can say what they want. But don't listen. There all lies.

Up the ladder: summers' dream

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10476
Posted: November 9, 2004 8:20 PM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2004 8:20 PM PST
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[3] deleted user @ 172.191.225.77 | 11-Nov-04/6:54 AM | Reply
Not good. Very basic and lifeless as a corpse.
[n/a] RION12 @ 64.136.26.226 > deleted user | 15-Dec-04/2:45 PM | Reply
If you think mine are bad.Show me some of yours to see if yours are bad.
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