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ok (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
shifting lights dance
down a dazzling staircase;
led by impulse
to pantries full of rotten
food,
step step slip
involuntary turn and
dusty broken jars,
the aroma of decay.
dry food scatters to the walls
on wagon-wheeled rodents.
china shatters in the kitchen
above.
and running
slip grasp pull step step.
empty rooms with
a tremor the floor is
collapsing
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9462
Posted: November 4, 2004 12:10 AM PST; Last modified: November 4, 2004 12:10 AM PST
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