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ok (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
shifting lights dance down a dazzling staircase; led by impulse to pantries full of rotten food, step step slip involuntary turn and dusty broken jars, the aroma of decay. dry food scatters to the walls on wagon-wheeled rodents. china shatters in the kitchen above. and running slip grasp pull step step. empty rooms with a tremor the floor is collapsing


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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9492
Posted: November 4, 2004 12:10 AM PST; Last modified: November 4, 2004 12:10 AM PST
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